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		<title>Three Tips For More Effective Writing</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[When you write for a living it is all too easy for your writing to become stale and ineffedtive. As a freelance writer I know it is all too easy to use the passive voice, to begin each sentence in a similar way, to let your writing tail off without providing either a proper conclusion [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When you write for a living it is all too easy for your <strong>writing</strong> to become stale and ineffedtive. As a <strong>freelance writer</strong> I know it is all too easy to use the passive voice, to begin each sentence in a similar way, to let your writing tail off without providing either a proper conclusion or a call to action. This post has three tips to make your writing more effective.</p>
<h2>1. Use the Active Voice</h2>
<p>All too often busy writers use the first phrase or idea that comes into their head instead of searching for words that will attract the reader&#8217;s interest. Whether you write fact or fiction these tips apply to you as a writer. Writing in the passive voice e.g. he was sitting in the chair is much lmore immediate in the active voice, he sat in the chair. Now and again the passive voice fits what we write but in the main, readers respond better to the active voice.</p>
<h3>2. Vary Your Opening Sentences</h3>
<p>When you write a story, a blog post or an article, read it through carefully at the end and identify your favourite sentence openers, most writers have them, change some of your opening sentences for something fresh and interesting. Readers soon grow tired of repetitive writing.</p>
<h4>Don&#8217;t Let Your Writing Fade Out</h4>
<p>It is all too easy to spoil a great piece of writing with a flat ending. If you are writing sales copy then you should always conclude with a call to action e.g. get your copy now. Most readers like a satisfactory end to a story, if your writing goes out &#8216;not with a bang but a whimper&#8217; to use Eliot&#8217;s famous phrase, you will lose your audience. Make sure that whatever you are writing has a satisfactory finish. What are your tips for making your writing more effective?</p>

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